Hi Bella, it's great that you have 4 of 5 blog format components. You just need to add a reflection, embed your work and include capitals to make this post a perfect 1.
Kia ora Bella my name is Jasmine i’m a year 6 student I go to Paparore School. this is a really good post but did you think about mebe adding a WALT or a reflection?? apart from that you blew my socks of with that photo it looked pretty crazy! And a heck load of fun. Did you enjoy problem solving??
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ReplyDeleteHi Bella, it's great that you have 4 of 5 blog format components. You just need to add a reflection, embed your work and include capitals to make this post a perfect 1.
ReplyDeletekia ora Bella I enjoyed the part when we got to stay in the cabin.
ReplyDeletekia ora Bella I loved camp because we got to do games instead of work at school. Did you think about going back to school? Next add more information.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Bella my name is Jasmine i’m a year 6 student I go to Paparore School. this is a really good post but did you think about mebe adding a WALT or a reflection?? apart from that you blew my socks of with that photo it looked pretty crazy! And a heck load of fun. Did you enjoy problem solving??
hi bella i like the way you chose such a good photo did you think about your reflecton next time think about reflecton. good jobe bella
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